Hazel's Side Story 6 - Park Cheeze
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jakekuda November 2, 2017 edit delete
jakekuda
Co-Written by CidYoshi
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CidYoshi November 2, 2017 edit delete reply
CidYoshi
Well!! That is quite different to what we had said originally. But I think what you made is better; is more deep and understanding, and you gave it your nice style to it. Really good.
There is some issues though. First, Hazel is missing her purple tips in the first panel of the second row. And you want to check that grammar in the silluhete panel. Other than that, is great, I loved it. Thanks for making this page.
Oh boy, Larry. He's going to be a real character that one.
jakekuda November 3, 2017 edit delete reply
jakekuda
Fixed!
-ARRG Note to self: don't stay up way too late scrambling to release things, and then wake up at 4AM to randomly check and then fix panels. Time for me to go back to sleep.
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